smart stupe complement
the alert things you do, I stop and run through the thoughts,
for you get up sharp obedient, I snooze a little, hazy lazy way;
ready you are, well trimmed, I rush through like crazy bots,
on time good breakfast you take, me too, but half an hour astray.
perfect bus, smooth ride to you, I run at its view, clinging on,
all set for a good day you, little exhausted commute for me,
good start at the desk for you, a tidy desk I could never don,
right post-its guide you, to organize my list, I am never glee.
polish one after other, artist, great feeling, satisfaction for the day,
tumble one after other, ugly dogged, dead, achievement of the day,
on the tick, post-its done, the corridors have a smart one leaving,
important ones done, un-essentials struggled, really time for leaving.
clean balance, sports awaits, music, friends and celluloid follow,
fluxed poise, instincts dictate, no one really knows what is to follow;
oneself, family, friends and world, nicely done in two dozen hours,
nothing to lose but scraped through all, so different the same hours.
for I have the sixteen lines and am very happy, even looking at thee
and probably you have the reverse lines and are happy, looking at me.
for you get up sharp obedient, I snooze a little, hazy lazy way;
ready you are, well trimmed, I rush through like crazy bots,
on time good breakfast you take, me too, but half an hour astray.
perfect bus, smooth ride to you, I run at its view, clinging on,
all set for a good day you, little exhausted commute for me,
good start at the desk for you, a tidy desk I could never don,
right post-its guide you, to organize my list, I am never glee.
polish one after other, artist, great feeling, satisfaction for the day,
tumble one after other, ugly dogged, dead, achievement of the day,
on the tick, post-its done, the corridors have a smart one leaving,
important ones done, un-essentials struggled, really time for leaving.
clean balance, sports awaits, music, friends and celluloid follow,
fluxed poise, instincts dictate, no one really knows what is to follow;
oneself, family, friends and world, nicely done in two dozen hours,
nothing to lose but scraped through all, so different the same hours.
for I have the sixteen lines and am very happy, even looking at thee
and probably you have the reverse lines and are happy, looking at me.
2 Comments:
yeah.. the poem reflects the poet's very psyche as he describes .... chaotic and comprehensible!
seemed better when read the second time... ;)
By Pradnya..., at 11:14 PM
cool.. one from the local train anecdote expert.. majaa aa gaya :)
By Scribbler, at 12:22 AM
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